范文一
Dear sir,
please consider me as an applicant for the position of an assistant secretary in your bank which is advertised in . i am twenty-five years of age and graduate of the xx commercial university at 1998, where i have completed the four-year course. besides, i have had two year's training in stenography, and typewriting and also studied the english language, including a year of business english in xx institute. i have also completed, with a grade of a. a year's course in business practice, but i have had no experience in office work outside our university.
in regard to my character and general ability, i refer you to mr. david b. smith, president of the xx commercial university, and mrs. betty r. hislop, dean of the business administration faculty. i should welcome a personal interview.
best regards
yours faithfully
A：(1)软弱、羞怯的： If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter, I shall be glad to talk with you. 读完此信后若您认为我还可以，我愿意和你谈一谈。
(2)改写后(较佳)： If my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you, I should welcome the opportunity to talk with you, so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
B:(1)怀疑，不妥、不安全的： If youre interested, let me know immediately, as Im sure and interview will convince you Im the man for the job. 如果贵公司有兴趣，请与我联系，我认为与您面谈后可以使您相信，我可以胜任这份工作。
(2)改写后： May I have an interview? You can reach me by telephone at Beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. 我们可以面谈吗?可在每天上午七至九点，下午五点半至九点与我电话联系,号码：123456。
C：陈腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……(我希望与您面谈) Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……(等候您的佳音) Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(静候满意的答复)
D：哀求式的句子，不够完整(漏掉面谈时间)： Wont you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.请给我一个面试机会，联系电话12345678.
改写后： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five oclock during the day. 能不能与您面谈以便进一步商讨?我的电话是12345678。我从上午九点到下午五点都比较方便。
E：太过自信的句子： I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 12345678. 我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四点(星期二例外)打电话12345678通知我。
F：较具体有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (010) 12345678. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be XXXX, XXXX Street, XXXX District. 能否给我一个面试机会?我的住宅电话为12345678。六月三十日以前我都在此处，七月二日以后，我的新址为xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx。